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ImmortalCh.3Whoa! Its a babe! Sara heard, still in her sleep. Back off Bane! I saw her first! another voice said. I say that I get first dibs, not you Ray. Spoke a third voice. Hey, you got the babe in Dallas, Don, and Ray, you got the chick in New York City. I get this one. Said Bane. I did not get the New York chick! Don said. Yeah he got the Dallas gift basket. Ray said. Saras eyes finally blinked open to see three muscled up men standing by the couch. There was a Japanese-looking man with a dragon tattoo going up his bare back. He wImmortalCh.3


ImmortalCh.2Where are we? Sara asked as she gazed at the few houses in the field of bright flowers. This, my friend, is where Night and I stay. Crow said. Also, our little buddies live here. Little buddies? Sara asked. Yeah. Our friends and of course He stopped to whistle. A few seconds afterwards, a pack of wolves started to run up to him. These guys. W-w-wolves!? Sara fell down wide-eyed with her arms over her face to defend her. Whoa, Sara. Crow said while standing Sara back up. Look.ImmortalCh.2


ImmortalCh.1No! Sara screamed as she reached out for the house engulfed by flames. Police held her back as firemen put out the fire. She fought until the few firemen came out carrying the bodies, the bodies of her mother, father, and 3 year old baby brother. One of the men removed his helmet with a frown, and she knew that they were gone. Slowly, she approached the charred bodies of her family, tears in her eyes. She noticed a mark left on her fathers cheek by lipstick, where her mother must have kissed him goodbye. Her mother was still wearing her apron, and her brother was holding his favorite stuffed dinosaur and his green blanImmortalCh.1
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